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Friday, 20 September 2013

Emmanuel


And then I saw a bright light from the Valley, Charlton’s ground, when I was playing football.  It was the floodlights. Suddenly the light started making mysterious dots. I started to shiver like a fish I wondered what the floodlights are doing? The rain started to come down as I crept into my locker  looked  out the window  at the floodlights. I got back outside and I saw a flood outside as we ran like Usain Bolt.
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  1. Unknown21 September 2013 at 02:41

    Great use of similes Emmanuel (shiver like fish)(ran like Usain Bolt)

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  2. Anonymous22 November 2013 at 02:34


    And then I saw a bright light from the Valley, Charlton’s ground, when I was playing football. It was the floodlights. Suddenly the light started making mysterious dots. I started to shiver like a fish. I wondered what the floodlights were doing? The rain started to come down as I crept into my locker looked out the window at the floodlights. I got back outside and I saw a flood outside as we ran like Usain Bolt.



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