I was walking through the park and then I saw a bright light
crash into the ground, so I went over to it and had a good look. It looked like
a meteor. It was 1 ft tall and 1 ft wide also it smelt like burnt beef so I
thought “what shall I do”. All of a sudden some man come walking by so I said
“excuse me would you know what this is”
“it looks like a meteor”
“that’s what I thought what shall we do with it”
“well we could take it to the lab”
“but what if we can`t
touch it”
“well we will just have to phone them up”
I really like your similie Harry.
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ReplyDeletegood use of similes your writing made me want to read on
from tina
Remembering is one of those days when we remember the loving people who risked their life’s fighting for are country. We were the poppies for the people that died who risked their lives for us. We say thank you to those who die as a hero to our country.
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