I’ve been
down in this deep, dark, dingy and damp underground dungeon/prison cell for
403.5 days (a year and 38.5 days) I wanted to see someone. I needed to see
someone, or I would continue descending to madness. I’m given pittance every
day because I was at the wrong place at the wrong time. You must be wondering
how I happen to be here with another 20 years to go. I was strolling peacefully
and then I saw a bright light. When suddenly there on the stone cold ground was
a girl with stone cold skin limp on the ground.
Great linking to our Holes story Heather. Great use of alliteration and great showing rather than telling at the end.
ReplyDeleteTry to include a piece of speech next time.