It was the
time I moved houses, I was so excited. I explored the rooms; the last room I
explored was the basement. In the basement, was an old cupboard, next to it was
a wall, on the wall was French writing, the wall said “Shine, Shimmer, Glimmer,
if you say these 3 words you will be teleported to a world of your dreams!” As
I whispered the three words the cupboard shined, shimmered and glimmered, the
door opened...and then I saw a bright light...I went in the portal and..........IT
WAS AMAZING, it really was the world of my dreams... when I came out I was as
silent as a mouse and on that day I never spoke anything about it...
Great 100WC Mayeda. Great use of adjectives and simile.
ReplyDeleteLoved the idea of being teleported to a world of your dreams, well done lovely piece of work.Mrs Wheller
ReplyDeleteIt was the time I moved houses, I was so excited. I explored the rooms; the last room I explored was the basement. In the basement, was an old cupboard, next to it was a wall, on the wall was French writing, the wall said “Shine, Shimmer, Glimmer, if you say these 3 words you will be teleported to a world of your dreams!” As I whispered the three words the cupboard shined, shimmered and glimmered, the door opened...and then I saw a bright light...I went in the portal and..........IT WAS AMAZING, it really was the world of my dreams... when I came out I was as silent as a mouse and on that day I never spoke anything about it...
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