YESTERDAY I DECIDED TO GO TO BROMLEY PARK WITH MY SMALL FISHING ROD TO GO FISHING. SO THEN I
PUT MY FISHING ROD IN THE POND AND I READ MY BOOK. ALL OF A SUDDEN A FISH WAS
FLAPPING ABOUT IN THE WATER.SO THEN I REELLED IT IN AND IT LOOKED LIKE AN PURPLE,
BIG EYED ALIEN FISH SO I THOUGHT WHAT KIND OF FISH IS THIS SO I JUST TOOK IT TO
THE LABORATRY TO SEE AND THEY SAID “OH I DONT KNOW LET US TEST IT AND THEN WE
SHALL TELL YOU AND YOU CAN TAKE IT HOME.”
LATER THAT DAY
“WE HAVE TESTED IT AND IT IS A KIND OF ALIEN FISH SO I WOULDENT EAT
IT IF I WAS YOU I WOULD PUT IT BACK!”
This is the second time I've read this story Harry and I hope you took their advice! Mrs. Weeks
ReplyDeleteFantastic work Harry, well done. I hope you didn't eat the fish!
ReplyDeleteNext time think about apostrophes 'DONT = don't = do not'