Yesterday I decided to go to Paddock Wood fishing lake and I
was relaxing in my chair with my fishing rod gently quivering in the lake. I
already had five tiddlers in my net bag to take home. Ten minutes later
something was tugging really hard I reeled it as hard as I could but my hand was
aching so much. SUDDENTLY! The slug looking alien that I thought was a fish
appeared out of the water. I was having a real wrestle with it. It stared at me
with its googly eyes. I was so scared I threw it back in to the lake as it was
so terrifying.
Some great use of language Jamie! I particularly liked 'gently quivering'. Very scary short story. Mrs. Weeks
ReplyDeleteThis is brilliant Jamie and I would love to see more writing like this in your English book. You have really described the scene to us. Words like 'relaxing, gently, quivering, tugging, googly' are brilliant. Keep it up.
ReplyDeletegood peice of work jamie loved it from tanya
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