One rainy derelict day, Jimmy decided to
warm himself by heating up some custard. Carefully, he put the cold custard into the microwave.
“DING!” Signalled the microwave, rapidly Jimmy took
the custard out of the microwave.
It was scorching
Jimmy hurriedly went to get a slice left over cake from yesterday and a spoon
from the draw. Jimmy sat down took a spoon of custard with cake on top he gulped
it down and said ewe. The custard tasted like it was out of
date. He
checked the date, it was off! That is why you check.
Very good boys, well done to you all Mrs W x
ReplyDeleteExcellent powerful adverbs and verbs boys. A short story with good advice. Well done.
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