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Friday 17 January 2014

THE CUSTARD ADVENTURE by Joseph, Mason and Emmanuel

                 

One beautiful day in Bangkok City, a custard tin was in a strawberry custard school. It was learning toffee custard maths. He was sick of the custard school, so he made an escape to get to the rice pudding school. Next, he took his bike and shot off like a roadrunner. He rode and rode till he saw a sign saying rice pudding school.  At the new school there was a football match between Strawberry Custard v Banana Custard FC. Watching the match he was hit by the football and the crowd started roaring in laughter. The ball hit him again and he went SPLAT!
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown17 January 2014 at 11:52

    Highly amusing boys, I imagine lots of supporters covered in custard at the end!
    Could you include a piece of speech?

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  2. Anonymous20 January 2014 at 09:22

    This made me giggle! I love your idea of having a custard world! And what great imagery you create right at the end. I can really imagine the 'SPLAT'. Super job.
    Perhaps you could add some speech in the middle?

    Miss Dale, Team100, Manchester

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