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Friday, 17 January 2014

CUSTARD DONUTS by Mary

As I plodded into Iceland, I saw the most magnificent, gooey looking custard donuts. 6 in a pack for only 99p SALE! A lady who worked at Iceland came up to me and said “I can see your admiring the donuts, those are the best custard donuts you would ever taste trust me” Convinced I bought 4 warm donuts 2 packets for my brother 2 packets me.  I opened the brown packet and took a huge bite and the custard tasted like a cheesy foot. I spat it out strait away what a ripe off a few
Minutes later I threw up yuk!         
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  1. Unknown17 January 2014 at 11:30

    Great word choices Mary. Next time read your work before publishing it. Could you help the readers with commas? Also a couple of spellings (straight and rip) Fruit needs to be ripe before you eat it!

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