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Friday 10 January 2014

Kerry and Kelly


Today is Christmas day and I am so excited about opening all my wonderful presents. I am intrigued to know what is in that little box. Opening my present slowly  I find what looks like a small creature which I have to put batteries in. As I do it starts to come alive! With black furry legs like a tarantula, it jumps out of the wrapping paper and shoots across the room. I am screaming with fear. What is that? I can now hear some scurrying coming from under the floor?
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8 comments:

  1. Unknown10 January 2014 at 11:16

    I'm not a big fan of spiders girls and your story has made my skin crawl! Great description and use of 'intrigued' and 'scurrying'. Great use of speaking to the reader as well.

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  2. Anonymous10 January 2014 at 16:22

    Well done girls I loved your story from harry and jamie

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  3. Lynda12 January 2014 at 11:10

    Oh my goodness! That sounds like a very scary present to receive. I loved the way you wrote your story and thought you used some great words. Well done on taking part this week.

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  4. Anonymous15 January 2014 at 10:33

    love the word scurrying from cydni

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  5. Anonymous17 January 2014 at 01:58

    Great story but it dose no mack sents in plases.

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  6. Anonymous17 January 2014 at 02:01

    Today is Christmas day and I am so excited about opening all my wonderful presents. I am intrigued to know what is in that little box. Opening my present slowly I find what looks like a minute creature which I have to put batteries in. As I do, it starts to come alive! With black furry legs like a tarantula, it jumps out of the crinkly wrapping paper and shoots across the room. I am screaming with fear. "What is that?" I can now hear some scurrying coming from under the floor?Pata Pata Pata

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  7. Anonymous17 January 2014 at 02:08

    Today is Christmas Day and I am so excited about opening all my wonderful presents. I am intrigued to know what is in that little box. Opening my present slowly I find what looks like a tiny creature which I have to put batteries in. As I do it starts to come alive! With black, furry, hairy legs like a tarantula, it jumps out of the shiny wrapping paper and shoots across the room. I am screaming with fear. "What is that?" I can now hear some scurrying coming from under the floor?

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