One windy morning I went to the shops
to get some beans and on the way I saw a bright red shed that looked really old
witch had a note on it saying “Please take me”. I decided to take a look in
side, but when I did I could hear
howling like a pack of wolfs! I tried getting out but the doors were locked I
took a look around and all I could see was dust and spiders. I had no phone on
me I was so worried I sat on the floor crying until…
Great use of a simile Kerry and you have left me wondering what next, just like the ending of Eastenders! Be careful with 'which witch is which'
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