Welcome to Chelsea verses Crystal
Palace, who are wearing their brand new pink
away kit. The match commences someone plays the ball and out of nowhere a
gorilla on a bicycle appears we laughed but then realised that we could be in
trouble because the gorila could get hold of the hundred grand and we really
dont want to lose that kind of money we all had to go before the gorila got
very angry then the gorila spoted the football and started to play like renaldo
and he took the biggist voly and scored then he ran and done a backflip.
Full stops, commas ad capital letters Jamie - this is a must, otherwise it is very difficult to read.
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Chelsea verses Crystal Palace, who are wearing their brand new pink away kit. The match commences someone plays the ball, out of nowhere a gigantic gorilla on a bicycle appears we laughed but then realised that we could be in trouble because the gorila could get hold of the hundred grand and we really dont want to lose that kind of money we all had to go before the gorila got very angry then the gorila spoted the football and started to play like renaldo and he took the biggist voly and scored then he ran and done a backflip.
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