On Halloween
night I put the batteries in my birthday present, immediately my robot grew
tall and became immense! BANG! BANG! I realised this was a disaster. The toy was
going to take over the world! Lampposts,
bridges, came tumbling down. The monstrous green robot grabbed an aeroplane out
the sky and smashed it into the Whitehouse! Then out came Obama. The robot
swiped him into the air and flew up to space and dropped Obama.
“AHHHHHH!”
Splat! The people of Washington saw Obama get dropped by a huge robot. The robot was unstoppable where will it strike next ...?
Excellent account of a rather scary birthday present! Good use of adjectives to describe the robot.
ReplyDeleteNext time can you include adverbs?
I wonder what will happen next? Well done for creating a sense of suspense in your story Joseph and Mason. This is a great 100 word challenge, keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteThe World's End by Joseph and Maison
ReplyDeleteOn Halloween night I put the batteries in my birthday present, immediately my robot grew tall and became immense! BANG! BANG! I realised this was a disaster. The toy was going to take over the world! Lampposts, bridges, came tumbling down. The monstrous green robot grabbed an aeroplane out the sky and smashed it into the Whitehouse! Then out came Obama. The robot swiped him into the air and flew up to space and quickly dropped Obama.
“AHHHHHH!” Splat! The people of Washington saw Obama get dropped by a huge robot. The robot was unstoppable where will it strike next ...?