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Friday, 24 January 2014

The amazing whirl pool! by Mayeda

Now I know what you’re thinking but to be precise it’s in a shed. An old shed. An ordinary shed. OK, not so ordinary but it looks ordinary. Now, moving on I really need to tell you about this non-ordinary story (it’s true,)

About 3 days ago I came across a biding place SO I decided to well, bid.  One bid later, I BOUGHT a... shed, yes a shed. So I checked it out and pulled this wiggly thing. Suddenly a whirly door came creeping up to me...
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown24 January 2014 at 07:37

    A mysterious beginning to a longer story. Very good use of punctuation this week Mayeda, well done.

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  2. Anonymous25 January 2014 at 12:37

    I liked the chatty style of your opening paragraph! Well done. Jo (team 100WC)

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  3. msokeeffe26 January 2014 at 09:01

    Hi Mayeda. This certainly is a very mysterious 100 word challenge for this week's prompt and leaves the reader with lots of questions. It really feels like there needs to be more of this story. I like how you introduced making a bid for the shed this is very different. Great writing and very creative. Well done
    Ms O'Keeffe (Team 100wc)
    Ireland

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