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Friday, 31 January 2014

The Circus by Millie S


The Circus

Majestically, Farty the pink circus performer gorilla happily swung on the trapeze like a monkey swinging on vines. The crowd loved it when Farty cycled around on his miniscule bicycle.

One day Chip, the squirrel, came to visit Farty. When Farty spotted him Chip burst into laughter and flew towards him. Surprised, Farty fell over and broke his grand bicycle!

“I’m so sorry!” Chip cried.

Suddenly the circus manager burst through the door and shouted

“YOUR FIRED FARTY!”

Chip started crying. He muttered “It’s my entire fault...”

The next day Farty went to visit Chip. When he got there he saw that Chip... committed suicide.

2 comments:

  1. What a dark ending Millie - I loved it up to that point! 'Your fired' should have been you're fired.

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  2. What a sad ending to the story! You could possibly use this to start a discussion about how we treat others? There were some funny parts to this story and I like your ending. Not sure about a pink gorilla though? Well done for using all of the prompt words. Jane Team 100 WC

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