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Friday 17 January 2014

The custard girl by Tanya

One winter’s night there was a girl who loved custard and would always have chocolate with custard every night desert and her mum told her to stop eating so much because her belly was as big as a pig

And her clothes size was 13+ and she was 9 years old. It was time for bed and her belly was really hurting. her mum took her to the gum so she could lose a lot of weight... 2 months later she had lost 4 stone but she was a size 9-10 and her mum was pleased with it.
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown17 January 2014 at 11:39

    Check your writing for punctuation Tanya.

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  2. Anonymous19 January 2014 at 04:41

    Hello

    This is Mrs H (team 100 wc) in Cape Town, South Africa
    Remember the rule to use the prompt words in your piece.
    It is always a good idea to read over your writing carefully and slowly before posting it. Then you will notice any spelling or punctuation errors and the work will be even better.
    Keep writing!

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  3. Anonymous21 January 2014 at 11:48

    gym not gum

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