Pink Gorilla
One
marvellous morning, a PINK GORILLA was riding on his GRAND BICYCLE. When
suddenly a dazzling flame blinded him. He dashed. As he
stepped in a
Monkey
laughed “I love flames.”
Mr Gorilla
ignored him, he ran inside fortunately there was no-one was inside. Rushing out
he heard a clank it was Monkey, Monkey was the one who had set the fire.
Mr Gorilla phoned the police, in no time the
fire was out and Monkey was in prision.The police thanked him and went back to
their old business. As Mr Gorilla cycled home on his grand bicycle he knew
Monkey didn’t work alone.
A good cliff hanger ending Eva, I wonder who helped Monkey? Some great word choices but I still want you to read your own writing before posting. Does it make sense? Have you used the correct spelling?
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One marvellous morning, a PINK GORILLA was riding on his GRAND BICYCLE. When suddenly a dazzling flame blinded him. He dashed. As he stepped in a
Monkey laughed “I love flames.”
Mr Gorilla ignored him, he ran inside fortunately there was no-one was inside. Rushing out he heard a clank, it was Monkey, Monkey was the one who had set the building on fire.
Mr Gorilla phoned the police, in no time the fire was out and Monkey was in prision.The police thanked Mr Gorilla and the police went back to their old business. As Mr Gorilla cycled home on his grand bicycle he knew Monkey didn’t work alone......