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Friday 17 January 2014

Return of the Donut King! By James

One awesome day, I bought a pack of custard donuts from Tescos that I was going to give to my Nan, she is ill, and I know how much she loves her donuts! I rushed towards her pretty cottage and rat a tat tatted on the door. The door creaked open when I saw a shadow along the creaky floorboards. I yelled out “Are you okay Nan?”There was no sign of her, Where can she be I asked myself? I sat down sighing I tasted the custard it was so gorgers where shall the donut king be...  
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  1. Unknown17 January 2014 at 11:46

    Fantastic start and middle James, I was really into your story. However the ending has confused me a lot. Can you explain the ending to me please?

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