Dear diary,
Those nasty builders said
that they would knock down my secret hide out slash bedroom, until the house is
complete. My trainers on
the window ledge, my school bag on the
wall and my clothes in a neat 9little pile on
the floor. The walls are pink the floor is white although my shelf is green (YUCK.) Hot pink bed sheets lay upon a slim little mattress on
the floor; the only benefit is that I can’t fall out. The best thing is I have
a huge violet sofa all to myself.
- P.S. update tomorrow!
Excellent use of although Millie.
ReplyDeleteNext time try to link your ending to the opening, I'd like to know more about your thoughts on the builders.
Hi Millie,
ReplyDeleteThank you for your story. Was your secret hideout the shed from the picture? I was a bit unsure.
You used some really good adjectives to describe everything in the story; this really helped me picture everything you wrote about.
Did the builders knock down your shed? I would like to hear more about what happened next!
Keep up the good work!
Mr Hyde
Team 100WC
Willoughby, Lincolnshire, England