One scorching summers’ day I went
outside in the garden of my new house, which I’d just moved into yesterday evening.
There was this strange old shed, I went to explore and the door was jammed, so
I pulled and pulled but it still wouldn’t open...
Later that day I gave up and went in
the pool for a swim. Then I called my mum so she could get me a drink. IN A
FLASH, the shed door swung wide open; I got out of the pool; tiptoed inside however, I
didn’t realise it was...
Very mysterious Tanya. Some excellent word choices in scorching and jammed. Good use of connectives as well.
ReplyDeleteOne scorching summers’ day I went outside in the garden of my new house, which I’d just moved into yesterday evening. There was this strange old shed, I went to explore and the door was jammed, so I pulled and pulled but it still wouldn’t open...
ReplyDeleteLater that day I gave up and went into the crystal white pool for a swim. Then I called my mum so she could get me a drink. IN A FLASH, the shed door swung wide open; I got out of the pool; tiptoed inside however, I didn’t realise it was...